Use Bulleted Lists
Bulleted lists can clarify communication in several ways. They convey that the list items are related, build in white space when typeset, and let readers pause and digest each item.
As with any tool, bulleted lists can be inappropriately used. For example, unnecessarily typesetting sentences as a list can imply a relationship between list items that doesn’t exist. Further, using too many nested lists flattens the visual hierarchy, making it harder for a reader to figure out what’s important.
Although lists can help most readers, they might not be appropriate for people with intellectual disabilities. A bulleted list usually starts with a stem—an introductory phrase or sentence—and some readers can’t hold that information in their working memory while they read through a list. As a result, the relationship between list items isn’t clear, and the list items come across as confusingly disjointed.
Georgia Tech’s Center for Inclusive Design and Innovation created COVID-19 information for people with intellectual disabilities. Instead of using bullet points to list ways that COVID can spread, they use complete sentences:
COVID-19 is a virus.
COVID-19 can spread easily.
COVID-19 can spread between people.
COVID-19 can spread when people are too close.
COVID-19 can spread when people cough.
COVID-19 can spread when people sneeze.
COVID-19 can spread when people talk.
COVID-19 can spread when people sing.
Even when using bulleted lists, different readers may have conflicting needs. For example, some plain language designers encourage communicators to leave punctuation off the end of list items to reduce visual clutter. But doing so can confuse some screen readers, which makes it harder for people with print disabilities to access the content.
Images can help break up an intimidating wall of text and make a communication more inviting to read. They can also convey mood, reinforce a message, and communicate visual information. But an image that isn’t a literal depiction can be confusing for readers with intellectual disabilities. Images, especially photos used purely decoratively, can be distracting because a reader usually can’t help looking at them, even if their content might not match or further the message of the text.
As an example, the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) had a COVID-19 information page with a photo of several people around a birthday cake, with the heading “Protect Unvaccinated Family Members.” The photo was used to convey the concept of family, but when user tested with readers with intellectual disabilities, many of them interpreted the photo literally, as people gathered around a birthday cake, and didn’t connect the image to the idea of a family.
When developing health information for people with intellectual disabilities, it may be best to omit all unnecessary images and user test images you do include to make sure that readers will understand them.
In English Texts, Prefer Words with Germanic Roots
For plain language editors who work in English, a common bit of advice is to choose a word with a Germanic root rather than its Latinate equivalent—for example, help instead of assist, or start instead of initiate. Words with Germanic roots tend to be shorter, more familiar, and more concrete. In health communication, this advice can be useful to follow: calling your hospital department the “kidney unit” instead of “nephrology” may be less confusing and intimidating for patients.
But for English language learners who primarily use a romance language, like French, Italian, Portuguese, or Spanish, words with Latinate origins can be easier to understand because they often have direct cognates in their own language. Further, phrasal verbs like throw up meaning “vomit” or pass out meaning “lose consciousness,” which often have Germanic roots, can be very hard for English language learners of all types to understand, because their meaning is usually idiomatic and not transparent.
There’s a misconception that straying from commonly offered plain language guidelines means your communication is no longer in plain language, but following a checklist isn’t what makes a communication plain. Plain language advice is based on evidence, but that evidence was gathered from specific audiences in specific contexts.
The audience is central to the definition of plain language: if you break all of these so-called rules and your intended audience finds your communication easy to find, understand, and use, then it’s in plain language.
These examples show how complex health communication be: different audiences will have different—often conflicting—information needs. If you have more than one audience, you might have to produce more than one version of a communication. There’s no single plain language version that serves everyone.
Center for Literacy & Disability Studies (2021) Guidelines for Minimizing the Complexity of Text, https://cidi.gatech.edu/sites/default/files/2021-02/Minimized
About the Author
Iva Cheung is a Certified Professional Editor, indexer, and researcher specializing in communication accessibility and plain language. She has won three Editors Canada awards: the Tom Fairley Award for Editorial Excellence, the President's Award for Volunteer Service, and the Karen Virag Award for promoting the editing profession. She holds a Master of Publishing degree and a PhD in health sciences, and she teaches a course on health literacy for Simon Fraser University's Plain Language Certificate program. Find Iva at ivacheung.com or follow her on Twitter.
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