--- title: The Perfect Brief Part 11 - Polishing Your Brief description: A polished document encourages a generous reading. Here are ways to ensure that what we send to the court enhances our reputation with the judge. image: https://www.wordrake.com/hubfs/the-new-york-public-library-LCVRXvROD6c-unsplash.jpg --- #### WordRake is joining BriefCatch. Discover how BriefCatch Next builds on WordRake’s trusted editing technology — and what this means for WordRake customers. 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Below are several ideas to ensure that what we send to the court is our best work and enhances our reputation with the judge. ## 1. Drop Names, Dates, and Numbers, Unless They’re Important All names, dates, and numbers seem important to a judge, so a judge will try to keep track of them. If they’re not important, the judge still will try to keep track of them, because the judge doesn’t know they’re not important, which interferes with her grasp of the important facts. On February 17, 2019, Yeoman Construction Company contracted with the Virginia Housing Authority to build 171 units of low-income housing.” Here, the date is not important, and the name of the contractor is not important. To avoid having a judge memorize a date or a character she will never see again, give the judge a *time frame* and refer to the character’s *role* by writing “In early 2019” and “the previous builder”: In early 2019, the previous builder contracted with the Virginia Housing Authority to build 171 units of low-income housing.” This allows us to draw the judge’s attention to the important name, “Virginia Housing Authority,” and the important number, “171.” ## 2. Avoid Abbreviations Abbreviations separate judges from our message. Use them only for entities the public knows by their abbreviation: IBM, ATT, IRS, NPR, NRA, NOW. But rather than call the “United States Coast Guard” the “USCG,” call it the “Coast Guard.” Instead of reducing “Sauk-Suiattle Indian Tribe” to “SSIT,” call them the “tribe.” ## 3. Check the End of Each Sentence At the end of our sentences, we often go beyond the point at which our reader already understands. Examine the last few words before each period to see if you can delete them: But the facts of *Armstrong* are not analogous to the present matter. If those words form a prepositional phrase—as they do in the example above—the odds increase they are unnecessary. ## 4. Pare Quotations We never pull words out of context to change their meaning, but we make life as easy as we can for a judge by paring quotations to their pithy parts. First, never preface a quotation with words the judge will see in the quotation; and second, rather than highlight *within* a quotation, quote only the parts you would highlight. Rather than writing: Hamilton is entitled to its attorneys’ fees and costs as a matter of right: “Except as otherwise expressly provided by statute, a prevailing party is entitled as a matter of right to recover costs in any action or proceeding.”  write instead: As the prevailing party, Hamilton “is entitled as a matter of right to recover costs in any action or proceeding.” We help a judge by presenting a quotation’s essence and removing everything else. ## 5. Cut Topic Sentences Topic sentences are good for sixth graders learning how to organize and express their thoughts. Once we learn how to do this, however, topic sentences only clog our paragraphs. A judge can follow our thinking without our placing a bald topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph. Instead of this: Mr. Gonzales’s time and attendance were very poor throughout his entire period of employment. In approximately two years, he was late for work almost 200 times. open the paragraph with this: Over two years, Mr. Gonzales arrived late for work almost 200 times. This is a much faster way to communicate with our judge. ## 6. Remove “Flash” Words These words irritate judges, like the ones we often place at the beginning of our sentences to show indignance, like *Curiously*, *Incredibly*, *Amazingly*, *Unfortunately*, *Outrageously*. And while we’re at it, let’s get rid of *clear* and *clearly*, *simple* and *simply*, not because they’re weak and unconvincing—which they are—but because they’re marked words: judges and their clerks are waiting for us to use them, and then we’ve just doubled the burden on ourselves. ## 7. Change Gendered Language to Gender-Neutral Equivalents Without making our writing awkward, we can, and should, write without assuming the sex of an actor. *Fireman* easily becomes *firefighter*. The same for *Chairman* becoming *Chair*. Here’s a further list that will solve most gender problems: - Substitute the gendered pronouns with the second person pronouns *you* and *your*, - Replace *a gendered pronoun* with the article *the*. - Write in the passive voice. - Repeat the actor. - Make the noun and all related pronouns plural. And as we frequently do when referring to judges or lawyers, alternate between *she* and *he*. ## 8. Remove “Transition Words” Occasionally, a transitional word at the beginning of a sentence serves a purpose, but only if the word means more than, “Yeah, and this, too.” Examples of transition words that add nothing to our sentences: *Therefore*, *Consequently*, *Accordingly*, *Further*, *In summary*, *In fact*, *Moreover*, *Furthermore*, *Indeed* and: Additionally, Yolanda reserved a power of appointment . . . . Finally, in analyzing federal agency employee’s motivations . . . . Skip the cheap transitions and rely on the simple tools: *also*, *and*, *but*, *or*, *However*, *Nevertheless*. ## 9. Search for the Word *Indicate* *Indicate* means to communicate in an indirect manner, yet many lawyers use it as though it means the more direct *said*, *promised*, *stated*, *claimed*, *declared*. If people say something, and they’re not speaking in euphemisms, displaying signs, or using body language to convey the message, they’re not *indicating*: Bauer indicated that he was not aware of the cost overruns and would further review the budget. This means that Bauer said something or did something in a way that led the lawyer (or the client) to believe Bauer was not aware of the overruns. Someone else, like a judge, might interpret Bauer’s “indication” differently. We often weaken our position by using “indicated,” rather than the strong, direct word we mean. ## 10. Never Use Tricks to Squeeze a Brief into a Word or Page Limit Judges have seen every trick we can imagine, and some we can’t. If we slightly adjust the margins or the spacing or the font, the judge will notice. Many judges will then strike the entire brief for not following the rules. Instead of using tricks, let WordRake help you meet word and page limits at the push of a button. ## About the Author Gary Kinder has taught over 1,000 writing programs for the American Bar Association, the Social Security Administration, PG&E, Kraft, Microsoft, and law firms like Jones Day, Sidley, and WilmerHale. 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